This is my first attempt at my magazine contents page, I plan to make it brighter and colourful. However I like how the bright blue and pink looks against the white. I think the 'Inside this month' article needs to be in bolder font to make it stand out from a distance. I also need to fill in the gap in the bottom left hand corner, I plan on putting a puff here of some sort. But I like how my editors note looks asthough its been hand written.